Another review of my poetry book http://www.themindspacemag.com/index.php?option=com_content&view=article&id=46&Itemid=58
The Voyages that the Soul Undertakes: A Review
of From Dulong to Beas
by Chandrakant Kaluram Mhatre
Asst. Professor, Dept. of English, N.G. Acharya
and D.K. Marathe College, Chembur, Mumbai-71
From Dulong to Beas is Jaydeep Sarangi’s third collection of poems in English published
in year 2012 by Authorspress, New Delhi. It comprises – in its 71 pages, along
with an introduction and the poet’s interview – thirty-nine poems that deal
with the personal as well as collective and the metaphysical as well as
political themes: the collection’s sweep of poetic expression is indeed
becoming of its title that indicates a pan-Indian outlook!
Most of the poems included in this collection are short
lyrics in free verse. They are written in deceptively simple style which is
highly conversational. One cannot help but marvel at how the poet shifts his
poetic gaze from his personal experiences of longing and frustration in poems
like “Take Me” and “What I Learnt from You” to the miserable existences of the
marginalised in our society through his poems like “Living Alone” and “Exotic
Jhargram”. He moves with same ease from grim politics in “Recent Trends” and
“21st February” to lofty metaphysics in “When the Lamp is Lighted”
and “Who will Solve My Problems?”. While poems like “We Need You” and “Stand
up, Dear Friends” aim at motivating the youth of the nation towards social
change, “Bengali Baul” and “Titas and Meghana” emphasise the cultural heritage
and the lifestyle in the Gangetic Deltas. Indeed, Jaydeep Sarangi has succeeded
in exhibiting his versatile poetic genius in this small collection.
Whatever the subject matter of his poems, Sarangi
expresses some of the most complex human experiences through his exquisite
images. The range of his images too is as extensive as the subject matter of
his poems. Natural imagery obviously dominates this poetry collection, but
among these images too he attains considerable depth and breadth of variety. A
book titled after two rivers (one being Dulong from Midnapore region and the
other Beas, one of the Sapta-Sindhus) understandably speaks through the images
of rivers! Rivers appear in subtly beautiful images as in
Mind that has engulfed within
Disappeared
as river into the ocean (“When the Lamp is Lighted”)
and they also appear in
ragingly provocative images as in
Why are you silent
When the river turns into a gutter? (“What I Learnt from You”).
Other natural phenomena like
birds and trees too have become the vehicle of Sarangi’s poetic expression
enriching its ecocritical dimension. In one of his poems, “What I Learnt from You”, expressing personal
anguish, appears this tree image at the beginning of the poem and gives it a
depth that wouldn’t have been possible otherwise:
As you touch my body
Laden with fruit.
Something similar is achieved
by the poet when he gives way to his lament as Sad wings twitter in
“Living alone” or expresses his ecstatic joy in “I’m Ready with My Painted
House”:
I have made wide verandah
Where you may unfold your wings.
This poet with so delicate
sensibilities, however, possesses a penetrating gaze too, that sees through the
modern urban existence and delineates it in a wryly unapologetic manner as in
Somewhere among the
trees
Some rare species of monkeys
Jump form one tree to another
Like a busy man’s schedule in a metro city (“Kanakdurga Temple”).
He unmasks the hypocritical
tendencies of our times in similar fashion when he observes in his poem “Recent
Trends”:
We do not speak our mother tongue.
We only learn the languages that pay:
C++, Java and English.
Jaydeep Sarangi’s immaculate
grip over his medium is definitely commendable as it enables him to shift from
one realm of human experience to another so seamlessly. It is this faculty that
enables him to bring together two entirely heterogeneous ideas as in the poem
“Poor She” wherein he talks about the exhilarating experience of love in terms
of a mundane car journey:
When my car is speeding through the highway?
or as in the poem “My
Homepage”, he juxtaposes an elevated spiritual longing with the materialistic
aspect of the existence:
For a holy bath.
Somewhere a holy spirit dismisses
Unwanted calls from a man
or the straightforward
account of the frustrations and desperations of the poetic genius in “Bright
Morning”:
Poetry
dies hard on a summer afternoon
Where life falls flat in a busy metro city.
Not surprising then, that Jaydeep Sarangi cannot but register
the political milieu in his poems. Not a big deal given the volume of
politically tinted poems in Indian English Literature! But what separates
Sarangi from the run-of-the-mill political commentators is his ability to
poeticise (as opposed to the versification of the latter) his experiences from
this strictly non-poetic sphere of human activity. An exquisite example occurs
in the poem “To Goddess Pallas Athena”:
Secularism is a move
A chess master knows well.
It’s not only the internal
affairs of the nation that catch the attention of this highly insightful mind,
even the external and the international find a categorical mention in many of
the poems in this collection of which “Titas and Meghna” being one remarks:
Two streams never commingle
Like two neighbouring nations.
The common man who bears the brunt of all that happens in
the political sphere obviously fares prominently in Jaydeep Sarangi’s poems in
this collection. Among all the hardships of the masses what gets special
recognition from this sensitive poet is their displacement and the
consequential separation from their loved ones. A number of his poems give vent
to this helpless feeling gnawing at the hearts of the multitudes. For example,
in “Exotic Jhargram”
Mukti’s daughter counts
days
When her father lives in an alien land
and in “The Tree of Life”
The mother and her child look bright.
A rainbow colour hope
Or a letter from Mumbai
Leads them to the Christmas tree.
Despite all his brilliance in the representation of the
social, political and economic realms of human experience, it is in the
metaphysical that Sarangi finds his Aatmaswar.
The culmination of his poetic genius is to be found in the poem “When the
Lamp Is Lighted” in which the poet asks the Aupanishadic
questions such as: Who am I? What is my Being? A fine lyric, this poem
gives the reader a glimpse of the poetic might that Sarangi possesses through
such sublime lines as:
However, the high point of
this creation par excellence occurs when the poet, looking within, encapsulates
an eternal truth in these words:
From Dulong to Beas
thus documents the varied realities that a cultivated mind experiences in
our times and tries to decipher and decode them in order to fit them in a
pattern hoping that it finally all
coheres! Saying whether Jaydeep Sarangi has found that pattern would be a
statement made too early, too boldly and at its own peril; but what is apparent
in this collection is the fact that he has definitely found the direction that
leads to that coveted destination. Anticipating a more emphatic statement of
his voyage on this highly treacherous course, one looks forward to hear more in
the future form this ‘Bard on the Banks of Dulong’.
(published in CONTEMPORARY
VIBES,India.2013)
Silent Days is a collage of ideas streaming from lived moments of ecstasy. A strange sense of personal loss and uncompromising pull for the native within pervade Jaydeep Sarangi’s poems. Inward-looking and at the same time deeply rooted in cultural and interpersonal milieu , his poems speak to us in their own rare intensity and simplicity. His pen chronicles a new history of the downtrodden,his personal pangs and sorrows ,his day to day life in a busy metro city as well as his happy celestial days of creativity.For him, life of a poet enjoys a full promise between the outer world and the creative self.
ReplyDeleteSome salient Comments:
“Jaydeep Sarangi gives a fresh paint to everyday living. ‘Small rivers’ near tribal villages are his haunts. His language can be unorthodox, where a rock can turn into a ‘reckless flow”, but his poems are a rewarding read, with the scent of herbs coming through the pages.”
-Keki Daruwalla ,One of the leading Indian writers in English and the recipient of the SahityaAkademi Award.
“The myriad of experiences thrust on us in every moment of contemporary lifeexercises Jaydeep Sarangi’s poetic mind, and produces poems full of questionsand hopes but also recognitions of limitations. The wish to break away, to take flightfrom moment to moment meets a realistic awareness of links to the land of red soil.”….Dr.Dennis Haskell, One of the leading writers from Western Australia and the Director, Westerly Centre, the University of Western Australia .
“This new collection titled Silent Days is a welcome addition to poetry in English by Indian writers. “ ...Lakshmi Kannan in the Introduction to "Silent Days"
Exquisite Images in Silent Days
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The poetic collection Silent Days is a collection of exquisite images, the language being one of its kind, where the figures of speech echo the sentiments in a brusque manner culling them into a palpable whole. The simplicity of expression coupled with the harmonic tone of the poems bestows upon them an incredible power of communication which delivers the message strongly to the readers. The poems cover a wide range of emotions, the poet’s mood swinging from that of gentle happiness to grimness, from nostalgia to a fight for the rights of the deprived. The myriad of emotions is indeed a delight to indulge in.
Colour is a dominant theme in the poems. The poet bathes in ‘green’ as in “Shiva’s green neck” in the poem ‘Morning’, “red and green” in “We are Connected”, “blue wings of my imagination” in ‘ A Rose is a Rose’ forming a “collage of dipping signals” even though he feels that “we have forgotten to dream colourful and bright”.
The poet’s nostalgia for his home becomes dominant through several poems of his like ‘The Red Soil Allure’, ‘I’m on Your Side’,’I Am’, ‘Growing Old with Time’, and he constantly refers to the “red soil”, which not only denotes his birthplace but also is an entity to which the identity of the poet is closely connected. And the poet echoes:
A sharp and burning spirit with concrete form
Takes me to the bank of the Ganges…
And I am reminded of the flavour of cooking rice
And an earthen lamp fed by castor oil.
The adverse effect that science has brought in the lives of the humans is portrayed by the poet in his poem ‘Missed Calls’ where the poet shows how technology has distanced people from their kith and kin. The poet voices his thought,
Promises hide their faces
Amidst crowds of everyday duties.
The language that he uses to express his thoughts impresses the reader while driving the thought home. In the poem ‘Silent Days’ the poet tells, “I shall ask the woodcutter/ To cut my shadow as it is difficult to wait for sunrise”. Then in ‘As You Go’, the poet tells “Turn left/ To right/ Draw straight lines”. The conjunction of “left”, “right” and “straight” seems antithetical.
The strong social sense of the poet is reflected very strongly in his poems as he voices the “…sad history of women in our country” in ‘A Rose is a Rose’. The pitiable condition of the women folks are depicted in the poem and it naturally culminates in his concern for his daughter Titas. The poet tells,
Brutal within is voiced
When her innocent body crumbles
She bleeds
The caste question gains prominence in his poems, ‘Why this Neglect’, ‘Bilingual Bird’, ‘Towards the Center’ where he questions the casteism practiced in our society which denies one even the basic human dignity to live with. The poet depicts this disparity carried over the ages as he tells,
None has read
Their tales of pain
Not even the Gods!
The poems in the collection are however not separate pieces of emotion. They seem to reflect continuity. Even the titles of the poem are in a manner as if one begets the other. The titles of the poem ‘Refugee’, ‘In a Home Away from Home’ and ‘My Other’, ‘We are Connected’ provide ample evidence that the sense element in the poems are continued from one to the other.
Silent Days is an incredible collection of poems and the poet takes his readers to the world of his thoughts, and rightly quods, “…poetry is the window of hope” that takes one beyond the “…vile illusion of transience”.
- See more at: http://www.boloji.com/index.cfm?md=Content&sd=Articles&ArticleID=14898#sthash.ek94VrZG.dpuf
Exquisite Images in Silent Days
ReplyDeleteby Riya Mukherjee Bookmark and Share
The poetic collection Silent Days is a collection of exquisite images, the language being one of its kind, where the figures of speech echo the sentiments in a brusque manner culling them into a palpable whole. The simplicity of expression coupled with the harmonic tone of the poems bestows upon them an incredible power of communication which delivers the message strongly to the readers. The poems cover a wide range of emotions, the poet’s mood swinging from that of gentle happiness to grimness, from nostalgia to a fight for the rights of the deprived. The myriad of emotions is indeed a delight to indulge in.
Colour is a dominant theme in the poems. The poet bathes in ‘green’ as in “Shiva’s green neck” in the poem ‘Morning’, “red and green” in “We are Connected”, “blue wings of my imagination” in ‘ A Rose is a Rose’ forming a “collage of dipping signals” even though he feels that “we have forgotten to dream colourful and bright”.
The poet’s nostalgia for his home becomes dominant through several poems of his like ‘The Red Soil Allure’, ‘I’m on Your Side’,’I Am’, ‘Growing Old with Time’, and he constantly refers to the “red soil”, which not only denotes his birthplace but also is an entity to which the identity of the poet is closely connected. And the poet echoes:
A sharp and burning spirit with concrete form
Takes me to the bank of the Ganges…
And I am reminded of the flavour of cooking rice
And an earthen lamp fed by castor oil.
The adverse effect that science has brought in the lives of the humans is portrayed by the poet in his poem ‘Missed Calls’ where the poet shows how technology has distanced people from their kith and kin. The poet voices his thought,
Promises hide their faces
Amidst crowds of everyday duties.
The language that he uses to express his thoughts impresses the reader while driving the thought home. In the poem ‘Silent Days’ the poet tells, “I shall ask the woodcutter/ To cut my shadow as it is difficult to wait for sunrise”. Then in ‘As You Go’, the poet tells “Turn left/ To right/ Draw straight lines”. The conjunction of “left”, “right” and “straight” seems antithetical.
The strong social sense of the poet is reflected very strongly in his poems as he voices the “…sad history of women in our country” in ‘A Rose is a Rose’. The pitiable condition of the women folks are depicted in the poem and it naturally culminates in his concern for his daughter Titas. The poet tells,
Brutal within is voiced
When her innocent body crumbles
She bleeds
The caste question gains prominence in his poems, ‘Why this Neglect’, ‘Bilingual Bird’, ‘Towards the Center’ where he questions the casteism practiced in our society which denies one even the basic human dignity to live with. The poet depicts this disparity carried over the ages as he tells,
None has read
Their tales of pain
Not even the Gods!
The poems in the collection are however not separate pieces of emotion. They seem to reflect continuity. Even the titles of the poem are in a manner as if one begets the other. The titles of the poem ‘Refugee’, ‘In a Home Away from Home’ and ‘My Other’, ‘We are Connected’ provide ample evidence that the sense element in the poems are continued from one to the other.
Silent Days is an incredible collection of poems and the poet takes his readers to the world of his thoughts, and rightly quods, “…poetry is the window of hope” that takes one beyond the “…vile illusion of transience”.
- See more at: http://www.boloji.com/index.cfm?md=Content&sd=Articles&ArticleID=14898#sthash.ek94VrZG.dpuf